Assignment #11

I think one of my errors in writing is not making a clear thesis. Most of the time i kinda just skip it and continue writing my paper without one. Not really sure why i do this, but its most likely out of laziness. Another mistake i tend to make is that i don't exactly clarify my points/views. I tend to just mention it and don't explain why. Also, I've noticed that I use "I" a lot. Sometimes it becomes too repetitive and all the reader notices is "I believe", or,  "I strongly agree" and that's all that the reader can think of.